Cheri commented on When You Least Expect It by Haley Cass
Caroline Parker knows three things to be true. First, she is going to be Boston's …
I'm absolutely loving the story but really, really struggling with the actual writing. Random commas that don't belong, possessive instead of plural words (getting cannoli's instead of getting cannolis - happens more than once so not the typo I originally thought it was), confusing uses of pronouns so after rereading a paragraph 4 or 5 times, I still have no idea who is doing what. Very frustrating.