Amber Herbert reviewed Nowhere Burning by Catriona Ward
A Suspense Lacking Tension and Vaulting Over the Inciting Incident
2 stars
By now, I should know better. While Catriona Ward has great ideas, she's never once landed for me. I'll admit to getting less than halfway through the first chapter. The kids are in a bad situation, but Riley's insistence that they leave NOW isn't brought on by an inciting incident. Unless the supposed inciting incident is a Peter Pan-esque figure coming to their window to deliver a map to Nowhere (which isn't enough of a break in status quo when I've hardly had time to sit with the characters beforehand). Not once did I feel mounting pressure. Neither did the opening pages and characters intrigue me. This is a classic case of "not for me". I'm not the target audience for Ward's work.
By now, I should know better. While Catriona Ward has great ideas, she's never once landed for me. I'll admit to getting less than halfway through the first chapter. The kids are in a bad situation, but Riley's insistence that they leave NOW isn't brought on by an inciting incident. Unless the supposed inciting incident is a Peter Pan-esque figure coming to their window to deliver a map to Nowhere (which isn't enough of a break in status quo when I've hardly had time to sit with the characters beforehand). Not once did I feel mounting pressure. Neither did the opening pages and characters intrigue me. This is a classic case of "not for me". I'm not the target audience for Ward's work.