#WordWeavers 2025.12.15 — How much profanity do you include in your story, and why? CW: Um, you can probably guess there might be questionable language in this post. You've been warned!
For those who've read my excerpts, or are aware of the grittiness of my stories, this might be surprising, but… if by profanity you mean use of the f-bomb or other unimaginative insults of the ilk, I don't. I don't use them. That doesn't mean my characters don't hurl epithets or use foul language. They do! They are human, after all. It simply means that they use their own words. (I typically write far future SF and magical fantasy.)
For example, Bolt from Reluctant Courier (for the Mob) is a day angel. She flies and she has wings. She uses the word "flap," which for her people is a crude masturbatory reference. It helps that it resembles a certain other word in our vernacular…
Another character takes great pride in interrupting people when they use foul words, warning, "Language!" It serves me to omit the offending words when they're almost appropriate. It't not prissy when she hurls it like a middle school teacher: she's often the most threatening person in the room (she's an enforcer), or is fully ready to prove she is. In other passages, the narration might mention "heated language" or "peeling paint."
I'm well aware of the tendency these days brush such things off as common verisimilitude that's even acceptable in mainstream writing, but couched right, rough dialogue doesn't need the added color. Rather than another hackneyed round of "f-you!" and "No, f-you more!", I think it enough for the narrator to mention that between the characters gleefully smashing in each other's face, their cursing burned the bystander's ears off whilst making the sawdust smell like it might catch fire. Since I don't write stories that take place in the here and now, my reluctance to use certain cheerfully crude colloquialisms is never a problem.
But…
When it could be, there is nothing like reserving a certain special specific word for when a startling fuck you will be a slap to the reader's face.
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